Talk:Sex offense (dictionary)
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I disagree with the changes you have made to the definition. User4 (talk) 23:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
- What is there to disagree with that is basically the legal definition?--Etenne
00:02, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- "A sex offense is a sexual act or type of conduct frequently considered obscene that have been legislated to be illegal."
- 1) A sex offense does not have to be a sexual act.
- 2) It is clumsy and very poor English to refer to a sex offense as "a type of conduct".
- 3) "Frequently considered" does not indicate either the frequency or by whom it is considered.
- 4) "Obscene" is a moral evaluation, and the definition varies.
- 5) The phrase, "...that have been legislated to be..." is very poor English.
- 6) "that have been" does not agree with "a sex offense".
User4 (talk) 00:11, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- Furthermore, from Wikipedia:
- "A sex crime is a crime of a sexual nature.
User4 (talk) 00:22, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
